Dream poem

[DanaC]

tho, actually, there is some good stuff in there. You're just trying too hard.

I wasn't 'trying' much at all. It was pretty much stream of consciousness. But thanks for the feedback.

[Hyoi]

Originally Posted by DanaC

I wasn't 'trying' much at all. It was pretty much stream of consciousness. But thanks for the feedback.

You're doing fine without trying. What happens at the river's edge?

*smarmy smile*