Ode To A Road

Sundae · 09-01-2008, 06:29 AM

I really liked it Dana.
I like the way the long vowels predominate, giving the stretch and the wait of the traffic.

That's the only minor criticism I'd have; you're not addressing the road - it's not the road's fault, it's the people's! Blame the commuters. Although I understand the appeal of the title.

And yes. Photos of Hebden Bridge please. I'm as fascinated as the Merkins about this Lesbos in the North. Especially the unusually large gays.

09-01-2008, 06:29 AM	#9
Sundae polaroid of perfection Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: West Yorkshire Posts: 24,185	I really liked it Dana. I like the way the long vowels predominate, giving the stretch and the wait of the traffic. That's the only minor criticism I'd have; you're not addressing the road - it's not the road's fault, it's the people's! Blame the commuters. Although I understand the appeal of the title. And yes. Photos of Hebden Bridge please. I'm as fascinated as the Merkins about this Lesbos in the North. Especially the unusually large gays.

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