August 12, 2012 - Rainbow Sky

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Originally Posted by ZenGum

The rain, in Spain, falls mainly in the plain.

The water falls, in Portugal, not in the shopping mall.

Originally Posted by ZenGum

Foot ... yes, nice tweak.

Originally Posted by footfootfoot

The waters fall, in Portugal, not in the shopping mall.

since this crowd is poetry-tweaker positive, in contrast to others who shall remain uncited....

"The waters fall, in Portugal, just not in the shopping mall."