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11-12-2011, 12:37 PM
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Until the End of Time
I feel so un-forgiven,
But I know, Jesus is Living, Deep within my soul, The Light is Just unknown, I will not condone, What I do not understand, I'm just working out plan, To make it to heaven, Like a smoldering flame, I'm not ashamed, To speak my heart, Maybe I'm not so smart But I will express my art, And Live my life, Conciquences of sin, Bend the realm of pretend, I just want to love God, Untill the end... you finish this poem Last edited by JBKlyde; 11-12-2011 at 12:48 PM. |
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11-12-2011, 01:26 PM
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We have to go back, Kate!
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No.
:p I'd really like to see how you end your poems.
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11-12-2011, 01:56 PM
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I finish my poems with "you finish this poem"...
it could be a lot of fun if you tried/// |
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11-12-2011, 02:00 PM
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still says videotape
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so I forgive myself
and begin.
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11-12-2011, 02:54 PM
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polaroid of perfection
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Come What May
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11-12-2011, 03:36 PM
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That's a bit dramatic sundae.. I like drama.. and griff.. I think your right sometimes you have to forgive your self before you can move on....
anyone else wanna give it a try... |
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