Dream poem

DanaC · 04-12-2007, 07:16 PM

It's too late to edit now, but I am thinking that the line " I said duck and cover" might read better as "I yelled duck and cover"

Also, explanatory note: The Golden Mile is the affectionate name for a road in Leicester. It's in an asian area and is all lit up. It's apparently the place to buy wedding saris and Indians from all over the Uk go there for their wedding togs. At Divali, it's lit up big style. People travel from miles around to see the lights.

04-12-2007, 07:16 PM	#7
DanaC We have to go back, Kate! Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Yorkshire Posts: 25,964	It's too late to edit now, but I am thinking that the line " I said duck and cover" might read better as "I yelled duck and cover" Also, explanatory note: The Golden Mile is the affectionate name for a road in Leicester. It's in an asian area and is all lit up. It's apparently the place to buy wedding saris and Indians from all over the Uk go there for their wedding togs. At Divali, it's lit up big style. People travel from miles around to see the lights.

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