Original Poems - Page 2

toranokaze · 03-18-2010, 04:48 AM

It is but sleep.
To end.
To rest.

At first pressure a point finely grain
A pin prick
A thrust
A dark red ribbon.

Life never looks like the movies. Not a beaming paint like sanguine , but warm and dark

Everywhere , everywhere nothing left untouched by this crimson brander

My teeth feel funny,
My head is light

I'm cold

NO
STOP
I just want to be warm again ... it has been cold for so long now

I can't get up, I can't move,

the pain has stopped
darkness takes its place

The last act

EMT,"DOA"

monster · 03-19-2010, 12:13 AM

Ther once was a dwellar from Philly
Who had an incredible willy
It was so damn long
it reached to Hong Kong
Where they just thought it was so sirry.

Shawnee123 · 03-19-2010, 08:05 AM

HA! Clever girl.

wanderer · 03-25-2010, 04:17 AM

My attempts at being poetic

A Friend Lost
Often on some days I miss you……..la la, la la, la la, la
And then I open my eyes tad so wide……
Taking the world in a single stride…..
To see you through to only smile….

And when it rains pure so hard……. la la, la la, la la, la
I sit on the canopy of mighty strange trees….
Laughed upon my folly by the only bees….
Thinking about you like a singing geese…..

When it comes to the primitive rivers….. la la, la la, la la, la
I never try to walk on the bridges…..
Allowing wind to puff strange in the ridges….
Owing to you who puts the many stitches....

Often on some nights I miss you……. la la, la la, la la, la
And then I open my eyes to the silver moon….
Caring none about world always so loon….
To see you through not gone so soon….

-------------------------------------------------------------
And another one (as if the first one was not enough!)

Spring Dreams
dreams do come true...
in the little ways,
like humming tunes astray,
in the nights and the days;

when you see them…
you try to chase things,
fluttering your small wings,
for happy heart to sing;

in the lost childhood,
feeling rain's like mother,
in arms of your brother,
or crying for each other;

swimming like a whale,
among the sea weeds,
or the fields green,
thinking of birth seeds;

when the heart beats,
holding a friend’s hand,
fighting for lost stand,
in every breath's strand;

dreams do come true...
in the little ways,
like humming tunes astray,
in the nights and the days.

skysidhe · 03-25-2010, 08:14 AM

*applaud*

wanderer · 03-25-2010, 10:03 AM

kerosene · 03-27-2010, 03:11 PM

Anger
I feel it bubbling
Troubled
Rumbling
Somewhere under
Carmel colored fizz
And red licorice film
How did such a small puddle become so dark and insurmountable?

lumberjim · 03-28-2010, 09:57 PM

haiku:

win rofl
omg gtfo
lmao fail

skysidhe · 03-30-2010, 11:24 PM

Internal dialog

It's out of the box-creative.
It could be a joke.
It doesn't matter.
It's fun for internet folk.

infinite monkey · 04-29-2013, 02:22 PM

Leave me here in Limbo-land
To prove you have the upper hand
Another Day Another Week
Doesn't matter, I'm not meek

Keep me here on String-Along
To show me I was oh so wrong
A few more days will make it true
That I am so much less than you

The secret to the Hanging-on
Is I ain't as weak as you are strong
And spare me all the changing rules
You only follow when you choose

Please release me, let me go?
'Cause I don't love you anymo'?
The words are true but you won't know
Just stop the crap, and let me go.

JBKlyde · 05-03-2013, 03:41 PM

powerful words make since im...

JBKlyde · 05-04-2013, 06:44 PM

I Love Jesus and Jesus Loves Me,
And I ain't gonna let no hell come in between,
What I love and What Loves Me,
So Take that Trash and Throw it in the sea,
Throw it in the sea...

Gravdigr · 08-06-2014, 03:34 PM

A Night At Buddy's House

Well, me and my buddy and his step-nephew Josh
Are sitting over at my buddy's house
Smoking dope and playing video games

Raising hell at high speed in heavy traffic
And getting a helluva buzz while we're at it
Are pretty much our primary aims

That's why I'm sitting here head a-reeling
Josh on the X-Box really wheeling
And my buddy in the recliner telling him where to go

Well, Josh's driving is really outta my class
So home is where I'm taking my ass
I'm at the bottom of my glass

And that's all that I really need to know

~Gravdigr

DanaC · 08-06-2014, 05:01 PM

hah! I really like that.

monster · 11-27-2014, 04:34 PM

If I had to write a Haiku about being thankful....

I'm very Thankful
Haikus only have three lines
Can I get drunk now? (family version: pass the pumpkin pie)

03-18-2010, 04:48 AM	#16
toranokaze I'm still a jerk Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Little Mexico Posts: 1,817	It is but sleep. To end. To rest. At first pressure a point finely grain A pin prick A thrust A dark red ribbon. Life never looks like the movies. Not a beaming paint like sanguine , but warm and dark Everywhere , everywhere nothing left untouched by this crimson brander My teeth feel funny, My head is light I'm cold NO STOP I just want to be warm again ... it has been cold for so long now I can't get up, I can't move, the pain has stopped darkness takes its place The last act EMT,"DOA" __________________ "Without deviation from the norm progress is not possible." - Frank Zappa It is the ignorance of ignorance that lead to the death of knowledge The Virgin Mary does not weep for her son, for he is in paradise. She weeps for the world , for we are in suffering.

03-19-2010, 12:13 AM	#17
monster I hear them call the tide Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Perpetual Chaos Posts: 30,852	Ther once was a dwellar from Philly Who had an incredible willy It was so damn long it reached to Hong Kong Where they just thought it was so sirry. __________________ The most difficult thing is the decision to act, the rest is merely tenacity Amelia Earhart

03-19-2010, 08:05 AM	#18
Shawnee123 Why, you're a regular Alfred E Einstein, ain't ya? Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 21,206	HA! Clever girl. __________________ A word to the wise ain't necessary - it's the stupid ones who need the advice. --Bill Cosby

03-25-2010, 04:17 AM	#19
wanderer Master of the Domain Join Date: Mar 2010 Posts: 225	My attempts at being poetic A Friend Lost Often on some days I miss you……..la la, la la, la la, la And then I open my eyes tad so wide…… Taking the world in a single stride….. To see you through to only smile…. And when it rains pure so hard……. la la, la la, la la, la I sit on the canopy of mighty strange trees…. Laughed upon my folly by the only bees…. Thinking about you like a singing geese….. When it comes to the primitive rivers….. la la, la la, la la, la I never try to walk on the bridges….. Allowing wind to puff strange in the ridges…. Owing to you who puts the many stitches.... Often on some nights I miss you……. la la, la la, la la, la And then I open my eyes to the silver moon…. Caring none about world always so loon…. To see you through not gone so soon…. ------------------------------------------------------------- And another one (as if the first one was not enough!) Spring Dreams dreams do come true... in the little ways, like humming tunes astray, in the nights and the days; when you see them… you try to chase things, fluttering your small wings, for happy heart to sing; in the lost childhood, feeling rain's like mother, in arms of your brother, or crying for each other; swimming like a whale, among the sea weeds, or the fields green, thinking of birth seeds; when the heart beats, holding a friend’s hand, fighting for lost stand, in every breath's strand; dreams do come true... in the little ways, like humming tunes astray, in the nights and the days. __________________ smoke on the water

03-25-2010, 10:03 AM	#21
wanderer Master of the Domain Join Date: Mar 2010 Posts: 225	__________________ smoke on the water

03-25-2010, 08:14 AM	#20
skysidhe ~~Life is either a daring adventure or nothing.~~ Join Date: Apr 2006 Posts: 6,828	applaud

03-27-2010, 03:11 PM	#22
kerosene Touring the facilities Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: The plains of Colorado Posts: 3,476	Anger I feel it bubbling Troubled Rumbling Somewhere under Carmel colored fizz And red licorice film How did such a small puddle become so dark and insurmountable?

03-28-2010, 09:57 PM	#23
lumberjim I can hear my ears Join Date: Oct 2003 Posts: 25,571	haiku: win rofl omg gtfo lmao fail __________________ This body holding me reminds me of my own mortality Embrace this moment, remember We are eternal, all this pain is an illusion ~MJKeenan

03-30-2010, 11:24 PM	#24
skysidhe ~~Life is either a daring adventure or nothing.~~ Join Date: Apr 2006 Posts: 6,828	Internal dialog It's out of the box-creative. It could be a joke. It doesn't matter. It's fun for internet folk.

04-29-2013, 02:22 PM	#25
infinite monkey Person who doesn't update the user title Join Date: Mar 2011 Posts: 13,002	An Ode to Job Leave me here in Limbo-land To prove you have the upper hand Another Day Another Week Doesn't matter, I'm not meek Keep me here on String-Along To show me I was oh so wrong A few more days will make it true That I am so much less than you The secret to the Hanging-on Is I ain't as weak as you are strong And spare me all the changing rules You only follow when you choose Please release me, let me go? 'Cause I don't love you anymo'? The words are true but you won't know Just stop the crap, and let me go.

05-03-2013, 03:41 PM	#26
JBKlyde Banned Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Encrypted Into an AmpitheaterWall Posts: 1,722	powerful words make since im...

05-04-2013, 06:44 PM	#27
JBKlyde Banned Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Encrypted Into an AmpitheaterWall Posts: 1,722	I Love Jesus and Jesus Loves Me, And I ain't gonna let no hell come in between, What I love and What Loves Me, So Take that Trash and Throw it in the sea, Throw it in the sea...

08-06-2014, 03:34 PM	#28
Gravdigr The Un-Tuckian Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: South Central...KY that is Posts: 39,517	A Night At Buddy's House Well, me and my buddy and his step-nephew Josh Are sitting over at my buddy's house Smoking dope and playing video games Raising hell at high speed in heavy traffic And getting a helluva buzz while we're at it Are pretty much our primary aims That's why I'm sitting here head a-reeling Josh on the X-Box really wheeling And my buddy in the recliner telling him where to go Well, Josh's driving is really outta my class So home is where I'm taking my ass I'm at the bottom of my glass And that's all that I really need to know ~Gravdigr __________________ These statements have not been evaluated by the FDA, EPA, FBI, DEA, CDC, or FDIC. These statements are not intended to diagnose, cause, treat, cure, or prevent any disease. If you feel you have been harmed/offended by, or, disagree with any of the above statements or images, please feel free to fuck right off.

11-27-2014, 04:34 PM	#30
monster I hear them call the tide Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Perpetual Chaos Posts: 30,852	If I had to write a Haiku about being thankful.... I'm very Thankful Haikus only have three lines Can I get drunk now? (family version: pass the pumpkin pie) __________________ The most difficult thing is the decision to act, the rest is merely tenacity Amelia Earhart

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