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Old 02-18-2012, 05:26 PM   #1
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He Who Loves Lives

I'm just guy,
Looking at the sky,
I don't want to die,
I want to Live Live Live,
When I cry no one cares,
Cause there not aware,
That this love,
Is more than a flare,
It's a Fire in my heart,
No I'm not very smart,
So I write it off as art,
It's just a sweet tart,
I have no one to love,
And no one love's me,
Still I laugh because,
I'm full of gleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee,

yftp

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Old 02-18-2012, 06:52 PM   #2
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Minor point: there is no need for an apostrophe with "loves" if you are using it as a verb.

She loves me. (verb)
I have three loves. (plural)
My true love and my love's friend. (possessive)
My two loves and my loves' friends. (plural possessive)
My love's lonely. (contraction, my love is)


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Old 02-18-2012, 07:04 PM   #3
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Old 02-18-2012, 08:08 PM   #4
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He Who Loves Lives
John 15:13 - Greater love hath no man than this, that a man lay down his life for his friends.
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Old 02-18-2012, 09:06 PM   #5
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Old 02-19-2012, 07:31 AM   #6
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She Who Only Loved A Cat

Half lived.
A life many would be grateful for
Wasted amongst the litter of dreams.
And even fresh water lapped
Has the sound of tears
When it is not milk to sustain children.

There is never time in this life
To stop and regret our choices,
Until after we have made them
And love is nothing more than
Cat hair on the pillow.
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John 15:13 - Greater love hath no man than this, that a man lay down his grammar for his friends.
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Old 02-19-2012, 02:13 PM   #8
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You Know what else yftp could stand for Y-File-Transfer-Protocol<- that's actually what FTP stands for... Interesting Fact I Learned in College. And really my family loves me so it's not that bad.. but this was my v-day poem to the internet.. abd plus Jesus loves me too.. I'm just being dramatic...

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