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Poetic Justice is My Friend
Join Date: Nov 2008
Location: Encrypted Into an AmpitheaterWall
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He Who Loves Lives
I'm just guy,
Looking at the sky, I don't want to die, I want to Live Live Live, When I cry no one cares, Cause there not aware, That this love, Is more than a flare, It's a Fire in my heart, No I'm not very smart, So I write it off as art, It's just a sweet tart, I have no one to love, And no one love's me, Still I laugh because, I'm full of gleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee, yftp Last edited by JBKlyde; 02-18-2012 at 07:04 PM. |
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Doctor Wtf
Join Date: Oct 2007
Location: Badelaide, Baustralia
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Minor point: there is no need for an apostrophe with "loves" if you are using it as a verb.
She loves me. (verb) I have three loves. (plural) My true love and my love's friend. (possessive) My two loves and my loves' friends. (plural possessive) My love's lonely. (contraction, my love is) KTHNXBAI
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Shut up and hug. MoreThanPretty, Nov 5, 2008. Just because I'm nominally polite, does not make me a pussy. Sundae Girl. |
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Poetic Justice is My Friend
Join Date: Nov 2008
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Plus 10 trust point's.
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déjà vu
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Counterpoint
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Doctor Wtf
Join Date: Oct 2007
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Shut up and hug. MoreThanPretty, Nov 5, 2008. Just because I'm nominally polite, does not make me a pussy. Sundae Girl. |
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Co-Strawberry Festival Queen
Join Date: Sep 2005
Location: Ye Olde Englande
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She Who Only Loved A Cat
Half lived. A life many would be grateful for Wasted amongst the litter of dreams. And even fresh water lapped Has the sound of tears When it is not milk to sustain children. There is never time in this life To stop and regret our choices, Until after we have made them And love is nothing more than Cat hair on the pillow. |
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only 99c
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: Tena City
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The most difficult thing is the decision to act, the rest is merely tenacity Amelia Earhart |
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Poetic Justice is My Friend
Join Date: Nov 2008
Location: Encrypted Into an AmpitheaterWall
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You Know what else yftp could stand for Y-File-Transfer-Protocol<- that's actually what FTP stands for... Interesting Fact I Learned in College. And really my family loves me so it's not that bad.. but this was my v-day poem to the internet.. abd plus Jesus loves me too.. I'm just being dramatic...
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