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Old 05-30-2010, 01:23 PM   #1
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Liberty Fighter

What is it that the oppressed need?
What is it that the poor can achieve?
What is it that the blind can see?
When ones own mind betrays him,
When the lights go out in hell,
When liberty sounds off like a bell,
The human will is still alive,
The words come out with a jive,
Will you fail or will you survive?
Hate will be destroyed by itself,
Like a robber of the common wealth,
Reaching in his pocket finding only death,
When it dies, it's left, with only itself to hate,
So make your choice,
Do you want to destroy?
Or Create?
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Old 05-30-2010, 04:52 PM   #2
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OK this is the edited version

Surviving Nuclear Fall Out....


What is it that the oppressed need?
What is it that the poor can achieve?
What is it that the blind can see?
When ones own mind betrays him,
The lights go out in hell,
And liberty sounds off like a bell,
The human will is still alive,
The words come out with a jive,
Will you fail or will you survive?
Hate will be destroyed by itself,
Like a robber of the common wealth,
Reaching in his pocket finding only death,
When it dies, it's left, with only itself to hate,
So make your choice,
Do you want to destroy?
Or Create?
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Old 06-01-2010, 04:17 PM   #3
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I hear the boom chooka boom of a rap song.
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Old 06-02-2010, 02:02 AM   #4
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Odd. When I hear music in my head it's usually more of the 'bow chicka bow wow' variety...
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Old 06-02-2010, 05:08 AM   #5
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I liked that.
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Old 06-02-2010, 07:44 PM   #6
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We've have got get the positive vibes flowing...

I'm haveing a hard time feeling my backbone...

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